You have my sympathy.
Though I will say it gets worse when you have several stories in the same universe, and then two completely separate universes, all in your brain at one time.
Im on vacation right now and my brain is so loud at this point it's just incomprehensible screaming.
I wish my brain could focus better:
Hey, this would be an emotional scene! Just need to figure out how the heck to get to it.
Hmm remember that one scene you finished months ago? I don't like it anymore, change it.
Maybe you should try writing smut set in your world. Why? No clue.
You should post some random worldbuilding bullshit on tumblr!
conclusion: a vampire is the next evolutionary step for pirrahnaas
This is beautiful, and honestly looks a lot more effective than giving people metiphorical space
i am a huge fan of @bamsara‘s IZ work, and was inspired to do a little scene from their fic Spacedust & Nightlights (this bit specifically is from chapter 2). it’s been about four billion years since i’ve done a comic of any sort, and i’m a little rusty, but this was fun to make. thank you bam!
Yes, your feet will be protected by
Sand
“what time is it” you ask, i pull out my 2.7 metric ton granite sundial and immediately crush both of your feet, I loudly announce “it is cloudy”
When there arevoice in your head that tell you you're not enough, look them in the eye and strangle them with your bare hands.
‘I am so tired of my own voice’
Hello to you too! I'm already really interested in the books you have!
Hello!
My name is Ian and I’m a writer so I figured it was about time I joined the writeblr community.
I’m 24 and use he/they pronouns.
I have a degree in Music Industry that I am currently not using. I also have a certificate in Writing and Publishing which I am sort of using.
I’ve been writing stories for as long as I can remember, but only started pursuing it as a career about three years ago. Since then I have self-published two books that I am very proud of.
In addition to writing I have interests in music, film & television, and linguistics. I also love to read so this will probably be a little bit of a bookblr too.
As I said, I have two books currently available in paperback and ebook. They’re called It Could Always Be Worse and Will It Ever Get Better? They are both part of a series called the Woodview Stories, which I plan to continue. I’m currently working on the next book.
It Could Always Be Worse
After a traumatic experience in her hometown of Miami, Elena Flores moves away to live with the father she’s never met. It’s not easy starting a new school in the middle of October, so when her half sister invites her to a party, she thinks “what’s the worst that could happen?” Elena must learn to navigate her new life in the wealthy suburbs of Long Island and try to build relationships, but that’s hard to do when she doesn’t know who to trust and she can’t let go of her anger and sadness.
Order here.
Will It Ever Get Better?
Jo Reilly has dealt with a lot of big changes lately. She’s sharing a room with a surprise half-sister, her parents are always fighting, her best friends aren’t speaking to her, and she’s falling for someone totally unexpected. All she wants is to be normal, but what does that even mean? Jo must learn to shed her insecurities, resentments, and preconceived notions, in order to be true to herself and find the people who really care about her.
Order here.
Woodview Stories
Woodview Stories is a Young Adult contemporary fiction book series. It tells the coming of age tales of a diverse group of teens living in the affluent Long Island neighborhood of Woodview. The overarching story progresses through the books chronologically with each installment switching narrator to focus on a different person's point of view. It all begins with Elena, whose sudden move to Woodview from Miami sets off a chain of events that affects the lives of everyone around her.
The majority of what I write in YA, like the books I have already written. I also tend to stick to contemporary, but sometimes drift to other genres.
I also dabble in screenwriting. I’m currently working on a teleplay as a side project. I’ll probably post a lot about that in addition to my main project.
I don’t know if I’ve put the right stuff in the intro post, but here it is anyway.
That’s all for now. Bye!
Anyone wanna here me info dump about the fictional city I'm worldbuilding?
I admire the dedication to keep track of 8 different royal lineages for a single city.
I really hope Akard isn't destroyed by his own paranoia.
Note: (Left) Akard as the Pabaket, (Right) King Akard
As promised, the last poll was a tie between Dati and Akard, I already did the intro for Dati, so now it's Akard's turn! As with other characters I'm going to try to avoid most spoilers, I don't think its too big of a surpirse to say that Hutbari is killed since that's what the entire story revolves around, so the events described in this intro will end there.
The new poll will be up soon!
As a noble Karush is named in the traditional style of a Kishite noble (Click here to see more). He is named for his ancestor, King Akard "The Sailor". Akard was born into the line of Asher (Asherdul), however upon taking the throne of Labisa, he declares the start of a new line, The Line of Akard, Akarddul. He marks the 53rd monarch of Labisa and the beginning of the 8th royal line.
See the timeline of the rulers of Labisa below the cut!
Father: The Deposed King Kurush (Dead)
Mother: Unnamed Apunian Servant Girl (Sanapi) (Alive)
Brother: Prince Hiru (Dead)
Uncle: King Hutbari (Dead)
Aunt/Ex-Stepmother: Unma (Dead)
Aunt: Tamyras (Dead)
Aunt: Saaket (Dead)
Aunt: Ladara (Dead)
Aunt: Duccarin (Dead)
Aunt: Zibatha (Dead)
Cousin: Bazus (Dead)
Cousin: Kota (Alive, Married in Apuna)
Cousin: Hiru (Dead)
Cousin: Unma (Alive, Married in Ikopesh)
Cousin: Ladaru (Dead)
Cousin: Asher (Dead)
Cousin: Sema (Alive, Married in Shabala)
Cousin: Fifina (Alive, Married in Apuna)
Cousin: Uridush (Dead)
Cousin: Ninma (Alive)
Born in the City of Nashawey, Apuna
Eastern Kishite (Labisian) and Apunian
Akard was born 27 years before the events of the story. His father, Kurush, was unseated from his throne through the machinations of his brother, Hutbari. Though Kurush was the elder brother, Hutbari's strength and charisma allowed him to forge strong alliances within the Labisan court, including with Kurush's own wife, Unma. These alliances enabled Hutbari to successfully seize the city, with his followers killing or capturing any nobles loyal to the old king.
When Hutbari, accompanied by the lords Farut and Haman and their soldiers, entered the royal chambers, they found Kurush’s son, Hiru, instead of Kurush. Despite being only eight years old and barely able to lift the ancient sword he held, Hiru fought with the bravery of a lion, reportedly even cutting down one soldier before his sword was taken from him. Though Unma begged for her son's life, Hutbari killed him. Hiru’s sacrifice was a distraction, allowing Kurush to be secretly carried away from the city. The shame of this decision haunted Kurush for the rest of his life.
Kurush was hidden in the cargo of a slave ship headed from Labisa to the coast and then transported to the Apunian city of Nashawey. Kurush hoped to gain the support of the Fapacha in reclaiming his throne, but the ruler of Apuna was not interested. However, out of a sense of hospitality, he allowed Kurush to stay in his palace and sent notice to Hutbari claiming that Kurush’s body had been presented to him, thus ending the search for the fugitive king.
Living as a permanent guest of the Apunian court, Kurush was showered with luxury and opulence but suffered greatly. His illness, Asherdul's Bane, worsened, disfiguring him. He refused to learn the Apunian language and was hostile to the servants. In an attempt to lift his spirits, the Fapacha sent him many beautiful men and women, hoping he would take one to wed. However, Kurush showed interest in none except Sanapi, a peasant girl fluent in the Kishite tongue. Akard was the result of a single drunken night between Kurush and Sanapi. Afterward, Kurush disregarded her and ordered her removal from his chambers.
Kurush never saw Sanapi again and didn't think of her until a servant brought a young child before him. The child, named Rebru by Sanapi, was two years old when he was found half-drowned in a decorative fish pond. Wearing rags, the boy began to babble his father’s name, Kurush, which Sanapi had taught him. At the Fapacha's urging, the child was brought before Kurush. Initially, Kurush shunned the child and attacked the slave who brought him. For his safety, the child was taken away from his maddened father.
That night, after many bowls of Apunian beer, Kurush had a dream. He saw a great king, dressed in lion’s skin, standing tall as a cedar tree before the walls of Labisa, driving darkness away with bow and spear. Beside this great king stood another, burning with a wrathful fire. Kurush believed this vision, sent by the sun god Re, showed him retaking Labisa with his son by his side.
Upon waking, Kurush called for his son and declared that the savior of the Kishites would not bear an Apunian name. He renamed the boy Akard, after Akard "The Sailor," the Drowned King. Kurush ensured Akard was well-educated. By four, Akard was bilingual in Apunian and Kishite. By five, he was learning to use a bow; by six, to ride a chariot. Kurush also taught his son about the great kings of old, Tamel the Mighty and Nasib the Lion, instilling a deep hatred for Hutbari.
At 14, with Kurush’s eager approval, Akard traveled with the Fapacha's soldiers to the deserts of Pyria, driving the chariot of Apunian general Batkhet. Over the next decade, Akard, known as Akarat to the Apunians, earned renown fighting the tribes of Pyria and the kingdoms of Namut. His charisma and bravery won him much love from the troops, though it also earned him the ire of old-blood Apunian commanders who saw their men fawn over the young upstart.
Kurush maintained contact with informants in Kishetal, hearing of Hutbari's failings. He formulated a plot to retake his kingdom, supported by Barunaki, ruler of the city of Bur, a vassal of Labisa. However, Kurush's failing health made this plan seem increasingly unlikely. At 23, Akard led his first battalion against the Namutian prince Qirush, capturing him despite being outnumbered. For this victory, Akard was given the noble title Pabaket, a Mouth of the Fapacha.
Around this time, Akard began showing symptoms of Asherdul's Bane. His father, now almost entirely bedridden, was mentally and physically deteriorating. Kurush had neglected to tell Akard the nature of their family curse, until then. Knowledge of his terrible affliction, and the thought of sharing his father’s fate, lit the fires of ambition and intensified the feeling of righteous fury within him. Shortly after Akard’s 25th birthday, Akard, in an act of mercy, killed his father by strangling him, disguising the evidence among the sores on Kurush’s throat.
Akard reached out to his father's contacts in Kishetal, winning their favor with his fire and fervor. He swore to avenge his father and wipe Hutbari's line from Labisa, promising to bring a new, greater line to Labisa. He even sent messengers to the roving tribes of Makur and the Sea Lords of Ikopesh.
With the Fapacha's blessing, Akard boarded a ship to Kishetal, carrying his father's ashes in a satchel of lion skin. Hutbari welcomed the venerable Pabaket into the throne room, unaware that the handsome young Apunian diplomat before him was not only his nephew but also his doom.
Akard is a man of average height with a broad chest, narrow waist, and a fit physique. His arms and chest are marked with the scars of battle. When he first arrived in Labisa, he concealed the sores on his skin with makeup to prevent Hutbari and his family from discovering his true nature. His features and hair resemble those of his Kishite father, but he has the terra cotta-colored skin of his Apunian mother. His hazel eyes are framed by long eyelashes. While living among the Apunians, he adorned himself with their decorations, painting his eyes and face gold and blue, and combing sweet-smelling oils through his beard and hair.
His handsome features will one day be marred by the ravenous spread of Asherdul's Bane.
Akard is charismatic and passionate. His actions and thoughts are driven by his ambitions. He has a strong sense of justice and of honor and will pursue these alongside his ambitions, his dreams of creating a better Kishetal, to terrifying lengths. When he wishes to, he carries an aura and power which draws people to him.
He can be kind and empathetic, a gentle and good ruler, however ultimately history will remember him as a conqueror.
Though usually reasonable, he is driven the fear that his escaped cousin, Ninma, may one day act against him, taking revenge against him as he did against Hutbari. For this reason, he obsesses over the fugitive princess.
Cis-man He/Him
Straight
Akard is close with his men. He acts as a sort of father figure to the warrior, Zatar (though whether Zatar also views their relationship like this is uncertain). He falls in love and in time is married to the seer, Zenit, once a slave of his uncle Hutbari.
His relationship with his family is absolutely terrible, after all he is responsable for the deaths of all but the runaway Ninma and those whose marriage had taken them out of the circle of Kishite influence
Cyan
Menam-hewud, a traditional Apunian stew made primarily of beef and onion
That the progress and prosperity he has brought to the people of Labisa will be destroyed, either by inner turmoil or Ninma's revenge.
No
Yes
Excerpt
Context: Akard confronts the oligarchic rulers (The Bidani) of the city of Chibal
" I did not come to this city to hear a greasy merchant babble about why they thought it appropriate to waste my time." Akard barked.
Wadikir dropped to his knees to grovel.
" I didn't mean to offend, Great King. Please forgive me." He leaned forward to kiss Akard's feet.
" Don't touch me, rat."Akard snarled, kicking at the merchant's face. "It seems obvious that incompetents rule this city. As recompense for your wasting my time, I will be taking this city and your heads." He announced coldly.
This caused the other Bidani to protest loudly.
" You can't do that! There is an agreement that the heads of the cities may not kill each other. You know as well we do. You would be breaking a trust between the city states."
Akard shook his head." That applies to kings, my friend. You are not kings. And besides, who would enforce that agreement? What Kishite king cares so much for your lives that they would rush to condemn me, and who would have the might to do so?"
" We'll have you killed before you even reach the docks! Guard!”
One of Bidani’s guards stepped forward, brandishing his spear threateningly. There was a flash, a spray of red, and yelp of terror from the watching Bidani. The guard collapsed as Zatar pulled the spear from the man’s gullet with a soft squelch. Most hadn’t even seen the spearmaster strike The other guards who had started to move to stand next to their companion tripped over one another in their effort to distance themselves from the spearman.
Akard chuckled dryly. " A valiant effort, but fruitless. If you did by some twist of fate manage to kill me and my friends here, my men waiting outside the walls would still take this city and slaughter each of you. Whereas if I lead the attack perhaps, just perhaps I'll have a change of heart and decide to spare you, perhaps."
" And if we surrender now?"
" I'll have you all executed, as is deserving of those who would abandon their posts so readily. Good day, see you all again soon."
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Men will text each other three feet apart
i am Men
Yes my man is finally in the running!
Help me pick an OC to Intro part 7! With a Twist
Hello everyone! I recently posted my last intro for Otilia. Now its time for round 7! However I'm changing it up a little bit, for this poll I will give the option of voting for either a character or one of the races/sentient creatures that appear in my WIP.
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