hello malleus nation
I'd sacrifice myself to you, right here tonight, because you know that i love you
the dwarves gathered in the tavern over a cup of ale to think about a plan to eliminate the knight (cwn)
staring at your crush during class
and then getting caught by your teacher and making excuses like “oh, there’s a bee in the window”
being partners during an assignment/project
doing group activities
watching the other playing sports
watching the other singing in a swing
calling them through the window
sitting together at the rooftop
borrowing a book and slipping notes inside them
flying paper planes in the classrooms
them forgetting their lunch so you have to share your tiffin
asking them to pick up a book from the tall shelf
peeping at them through that book in the library
sharing notes because they were sleeping during class
“can i sit beside you if the seat is not taken…?”
focusing so much on that person that you almost miss out what the teacher is saying
feeling proud and happy when a teacher compliments them
immediately looking at them to see their reaction when the teacher compliments you
“good morning” during prayer time that makes your day
trying to locate him in the queue during the morning assembly
searching in google or youtube “how to know if my crush likes me back”
hating school and then suddenly loving it because you know they would be there
waving them goodbye with a fond smile when the final bell rings
passionately hoping that you meet them somewhere other than school
and imagining endless scenarios with them ofc
-- "It's plain she cares for you very deeply." -- "And I her. Which is why I had to let her go."
For the writers struggling to rid themselves of the classic ‘said’. Some are repeated in different categories since they fit multiple ones (but those are counted once so it adds up to 100 new words).
1. Neutral Tags
Straightforward and unobtrusive dialogue tags:
Added, Replied, Stated, Remarked, Responded, Observed, Acknowledged, Commented, Noted, Voiced, Expressed, Shared, Answered, Mentioned, Declared.
2. Questioning Tags
Curious, interrogative dialogue tags:
Asked, Queried, Wondered, Probed, Inquired, Requested, Pondered, Demanded, Challenged, Interjected, Investigated, Countered, Snapped, Pleaded, Insisted.
3. Emotive Tags
Emotional dialogue tags:
Exclaimed, Shouted, Sobbed, Whispered, Cried, Hissed, Gasped, Laughed, Screamed, Stammered, Wailed, Murmured, Snarled, Choked, Barked.
4. Descriptive Tags
Insightful, tonal dialogue tags:
Muttered, Mumbled, Yelled, Uttered, Roared, Bellowed, Drawled, Spoke, Shrieked, Boomed, Snapped, Groaned, Rasped, Purred, Croaked.
5. Action-Oriented Tags
Movement-based dialogue tags:
Announced, Admitted, Interrupted, Joked, Suggested, Offered, Explained, Repeated, Advised, Warned, Agreed, Confirmed, Ordered, Reassured, Stated.
6. Conflict Tags
Argumentative, defiant dialogue tags:
Argued, Snapped, Retorted, Rebuked, Disputed, Objected, Contested, Barked, Protested, Countered, Growled, Scoffed, Sneered, Challenged, Huffed.
7. Agreement Tags
Understanding, compliant dialogue tags:
Agreed, Assented, Nodded, Confirmed, Replied, Conceded, Acknowledged, Accepted, Affirmed, Yielded, Supported, Echoed, Consented, Promised, Concurred.
8. Disagreement Tags
Resistant, defiant dialogue tags:
Denied, Disagreed, Refused, Argued, Contradicted, Insisted, Protested, Objected, Rejected, Declined, Countered, Challenged, Snubbed, Dismissed, Rebuked.
9. Confused Tags
Hesitant, uncertain dialogue tags:
Stammered, Hesitated, Fumbled, Babbled, Mumbled, Faltered, Stumbled, Wondered, Pondered, Stuttered, Blurted, Doubted, Confessed, Vacillated.
10. Surprise Tags
Shock-inducing dialogue tags:
Gasped, Stunned, Exclaimed, Blurted, Wondered, Staggered, Marvelled, Breathed, Recoiled, Jumped, Yelped, Shrieked, Stammered.
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@llondonfog @serenescribe @admiraltdevanto y'all, this is so sweet. If someone knows the original artist, please let me know
"If you remember, I'll praise you more!" "Oh, really? Why are you going to compliment me... 'Sir Knight'?"
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