Hey it's alright, no need to apologize we can wait and take time as long as you needπ
hey anon! I just wanted to say a big thank you for your kind words. They truly mean a lot to me and made my day brighter.
your support is greatly appreciated.
π―οΈ The PUBLIC DEMO has officially been updated! PLAY HERE! π―οΈ
Here's the entirety of Chapter Two!
This update has added around 31,000 words making the grand total around 73,000. You will need a new save, do not use old saves as it will break the game.
Warnings for copious mentions of blood and a smidge of body horror.
π€ Meet your ghosts...literally. Talk to them, too.
π€ Find a drunk angel in the hallway and react accordingly.
π€ Spend time with your friends...they might drive you crazy.
π€ Meet...not a ghost, nor a demon. Who are they? What are they?
π€ ...What haunts you, Unchosen?
wow! I read the demo and the writing is soo good!! and this is still the prologue! I wish you goodluck on the development of this IFπ
aww anon π₯Ί your words mean so much to me! as a perfectionist, I struggle to feel satisfied with my work even after finishing it.
thank you so much, this means a lot! And I canβt wait to hopefully share chapter one someday soon. :)
We just hit 50+ followers, this is insane! Thank you everyone so much for the support and helpful tips!
Earlier today, I was editing on Artbreeder for almost three hours (since Iβm a perfectionist π) and I just finished the first RO appearance. I just need to add a couple of touch-ups and it will be done!
Iβm thinking the prologue will be out next month. Fingers crossed!π€ Iβve already written some drafts here and there.
Thank you again!!
Played the demo and I really like it, makes me excited for what's to come. Soul collector is very interesting, I want to know what's going on in their gnoggin. I love a schemer!
On another note Aurelian is gonna get it, it's on sight when we see him again. (To smooch or to kill, that is the question?)
Iβm glad you enjoyed it, anon! <3
SC is such a fun character to write. You just donβt know which side theyβre on, and it makes scenes very chaotic and exciting. π€
Thatβs a very good question. I will let you decide when you meet him. π
On the day when the rain fell and flooded the ground, the sign of the wolf appeared outside of town.
Magici: Worldstar is a contemporary fantasy romantic drama, a first part to the Magici series.
Ever wanted to become the best magician in the world? Ever wanted to become famous while at it?
Well, according to this flyer, by applying for this magic academy-turned-talent show, you can.
A chance to develop your magical affinities, get a free higher education from a redeemed academy, meet people from all over the world, possibly win 300 000 kubos (not sure about the conversion rates but that's a lot of money), AND become mindblowingly famous while at it?
Friends, mentors, rivals, lovers? In the end, the top only has space for one.
Will you be the one standing there?
But more importantly, what will you do to get there?
Find out in the next season of Magici: Worldstar, applications open starting NOW.
reblogs/asks are crazy appreciated
+10k words added to Chapter 1, bringing the total word count to 50k (with code)
More curt/unfriendly options towards mortals and other gods (Salvatore, parents, etc.)
More customization options, including new hair colors, eye colors, and distinctive features in Chapter 1
Multipronouns you can set in Chapter 1 (may change in future chapters)
Choice of clothes to wear to the Ceremony, which ROs may compliment if they like (3 out of 6 options for each of them!)
A new scene with your parents before the Ceremony where you can decide your relationship with them! (affects dialogue)
Option to storm off if you're mad at Ciocana, especially if you're touch-averse
Misc edits, bug fixes, and background performance improvements
This update is a massive improvement for new readers rather than warranting an entirely new playthrough. If you have any saves right before the Ceremony, you can find the most content there! However, the changes and additions are all over the demo.
My friend suggested I start one up! I hope to set up some events, share more sneak peeks, and connect with others more with this! π«Άπ I also added some fun things like anonymous confessions and customizable color names, so please join! :)
(Very detailed changelog below if you're interested!)
Minor rewording for Karen encounter.
MC can now openly grimace when mortals call for MC's attention in Chapter 1. Previously, the only real negative reaction to them is turning away, which is open for any interpretation as to why MC does so.
When mortals ask for MC's help, MC can snap at them to speak quickly.
Most choices suggested you are friendly with Nero, so added a couple of options that are neutral towards him, leaning towards dismissive.
Rewrote a line that says you waved to Nero goodbye. It simply says that he departs.
Added an option to be frustrated with the conversation about mortals, when the only other non-positive options about mortals were about being completely disinterested.
Added an option where the MC says they can take care of themselves or they don't need other people worrying about them so much.
When choosing to be touch averse, selective, or not touch averse, you can now choose to be selective and not want to touch Rafaele, which initially was not an option.
If you are the Universal Eye, you tell Salvatore about the Universe being in pain and they dismiss it, you may be able to refuse conversation with them. They might keep talking to you, but you won't respond to them.
Can decide your relationship to your parents. Can also decide if you're open about your feelings towards them or not.
Variations in how your parents speak to you while preparing and during the Ceremony if they are aware of your bitterness towards them.
Can again openly express disdain for mortals or keep your feelings to yourself when answering Rafaele's question, when originally those options were absent
Can storm off from Ciocana if you do not express positive feelings about the dance, especially if you are touch-averse.
Added blue, pink, purple, and no hair options to Chapter 1, not available in the prologue.
Added red and gold eye colors to Chapter 1, not available in the prologue.
Added clothes option to Chapter 1 to wear to the Ceremony.
ROs will comment on your clothes if they particularly like it during the Ceremony (each have 3 out of 6 clothes they like.)
Added pronouns before the Ceremony. You can have multiple pronouns, remove them, and add multiple of the same kind to increase its chances of frequency.
Minor edits and bug fixes.
See you guys soon for the Chapter 2 update :)
THE PROLOGUE IS IN FEW HOURS?!!! OH MY GOSH I NEED TO CLICK IT FAST SO THAT I HAVE MORE MOTIVATION TO DRAW MY MC AND THE RO'S!!!ππππππππππππππππ
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